This is my second attempt at my video. I think it's much better than the first. I added more audio, a clip of me banging on some metal box that I found. I think it helps drive the video forward very well. I also fixed the problem of the video dragging by speeding up the cycle of clips as they went along. But it's still missing something. The product still doesn't say enough to me. It doesn't tell me a story, it doesn't seem to have a perspective. I think part of the problem is that the audio (which does all start to build near the end) doesn't nearly build enough, and the calming ending of the peace doesn't seem nearly calm enough in contrast. Back to the drawing board.
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